Marketplace conversion copywriting

Your ads work. The page they land on doesn't.

You already pay for the click. Then the listing fumbles it. Paste yours and we'll email you a free teardown: your conversion score, the exact flaws in your own words, and one line rewritten so the difference is obvious. The full hand-finished pack starts at $149.

Amazon · Etsy · Shopify · eBay · Walmart. English that reads native to US, UK, Canada & Australia shoppers.

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Free — no card, no account, no tracking. Want the full pack now? See pricing →

Nothing invented. We work only from what's on your page. The rewrite never claims a spec your product doesn't have.

bhaniti · teardownFree teardown
awaiting listing…
Here's what a teardown looks like: your score, the specific flaws, a sample rewrite. Paste your listing and we'll email you yours.

Why this isn't another inbox pitch

You see the work before you trust us with a cent.

Most listing services want your money before you've seen a thing. We'd rather show you first: a real diagnosis of your listing and a line of it rewritten, free, before you've paid for anything.

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Proof first

You get a specific, named diagnosis of your own listing plus a sample rewrite, free. Judge the actual work instead of a sales promise.

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Nothing hidden

The exact six-axis rubric we score against is published right below. If someone won't show you how they judge a listing, that tells you something.

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Copy that sells, not a data dump

We rewrite the title, bullets and description that decide whether the shopper your ad paid for actually buys — the writing a ten-minute keyword tool will never do for you.

The scoring rubric, in the open

The six things we check — and what a low score on each one is quietly costing you.

Your free score comes off the same six axes we rewrite against. It's our scoring, shown in full so you can argue with it. The radar plots a sample listing; we'll plot yours in the free teardown you request above.

KeywordHookBenefitScanA+FAQ
  • Keyword coverageBuyer terms near the front of the title, and in the bullets.55
  • Hook strengthAfter the brand, does the title front-load the #1 buying reason, or burn the prime first words on filler?40
  • Benefit vs. featureDo bullets answer "so what do I get," or just list specs?35
  • ScannabilityCan a phone shopper get the value in three seconds?70
  • A+ / descriptionStructured copy to handle objections before add-to-cart.30
  • FAQ & returnsPre-empting the questions that trigger returns and 1-stars.25
A finished example

Same product, same ad spend, but a listing that actually closes the click you paid for.

Illustrative before and after (fictional brand "CookNest", to show format & quality). Every line maps to a real product attribute, nothing invented.

CookNest · Ceramic Non-Stick Frying Pan 24cm / 9.5″ · induction & gas · even-heat aluminium base
Before: your listing
CookNest Non Stick Frying Pan 24cm Ceramic Coating Nonstick Skillet Egg Pan Cookware Kitchen Gas Induction Compatible Black
  • PREMIUM QUALITY: Made from high quality aluminium with durable ceramic non stick coating, PFOA free, safe and healthy for your family.
  • MULTI USE: 24cm / 9.5 inch frying pan suitable for gas and induction cooktops, great for eggs, pancakes, omelettes, stir fry and more.
  • EASY TO CLEAN: Non stick surface is easy to clean and dishwasher safe, comfortable handle for everyday cooking, a must have for your kitchen.
After: rewrite
CookNest 9.5″ Ceramic Non-Stick Frying Pan, Even-Heat Aluminium Base for Induction & Gas, PFOA-Free Coating, Less-Oil Cooking for Eggs, Pancakes & Stir-Fry
  • Eggs slide off, pancakes flip without tearing: the PFOA-free ceramic surface releases food cleanly, so you cook with little or no oil and nothing welds to the pan.
  • No stuck-on mess, no scrubbing:a quick rinse clears it and it's dishwasher-safe, so the pan that's easy to cook in is just as easy to put away.
  • Heats evenly on the stove you already own: the flat aluminium base spreads heat without hot spots and works on both induction and gas, so there's no cold-ring in the middle and nothing to replace.

The example above is fictional. We never publish a client's listing, brand, or results without their written permission, so your real work stays private unless you choose to share it.

No calls · no onboarding

Paste a listing, get it back the same day, ready to drop in.

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Get a free teardown

Paste the listing your ads point at. We email back a free teardown: a readiness score and the exact spots it's losing buyers, with one line already rewritten so you can see what changes.

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Order your pack

Pick a tier and pay through a secure checkout. We start writing the moment it clears.

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Your pack comes back

Title, 5 bullets, A+ description, keywords, image lines and FAQ, ready to paste.

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Paste & convert

Drop it into Seller Central or your store. Same budget driving the clicks, but more of them turning into orders.

How the pack gets made

AI drafts fast from your facts. A human makes it worth pasting.

Pure AI writes ten plausible listings a minute and invents a spec in every one. A freelancer writes one careful listing a week. We run the draft on a machine and the judgement on a person, so you get the speed of the first with the care of the second, and a pack that never claims something your product doesn't.

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Your real facts go in

Size, material, what it actually does. Nothing else. The draft is built from the specs you supply, not from whatever the model has read about your category.

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AI drafts on the rubric

The model writes the whole pack against the same six axes we score you on, fast. Any gap it can't fill from your facts it leaves marked [CONFIRM WITH SELLER] rather than guessing.

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A conversion editor finishes it

A person who writes for a living tightens the voice, checks every claim against your facts, weaves the keywords in so they read like English, and clears it against marketplace policy. The draft is raw material; this is the work.

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A paste-ready pack comes out

Title, five bullets, an A+ description, keywords, image lines and an FAQ, written to drop straight into Seller Central or your store. No file to reformat, no second draft to commission.

The guardrails, plainly

Speed you can trust because a person signs it off.

  • Nothing invented. Every claim traces back to a fact you gave us. No model-hallucinated certifications, dimensions or material specs.
  • Gaps are flagged, not filled. Where a fact is missing, you get a [CONFIRM WITH SELLER] marker to fill in, never a confident-sounding guess.
  • Compliance-safe by default. The editor strips the medical, superlative and competitor claims that get listings suppressed, before you ever paste a word.
  • It still reads like you. The keywords are worked into real sentences, not stuffed, so the page sounds like a brand and not a bot.
Why not just do it yourself

Three ways to fix a listing. One of them is our whole job.

DIY with AI

Fast and nearly free, and it will confidently invent a spec your product doesn't have. The copy reads generic unless you already know what converts on your marketplace.

You become the editor
A freelancer

Often $200–500 a listing and days of back-and-forth. Quality swings with whoever you hire, and most write general copy, not marketplace conversion.

A gamble on the hire
Bhaniti भणिति

From $149, back the same day, scored against a published rubric. AI speed with a human's judgement, nothing invented, and a free teardown so you see the work before you pay.

Built for this one thing
A good fit if

you're paying for clicks to a listing that underperforms, and you want it fixed without learning copywriting or managing a freelancer.

Probably not yet if

your page gets no traffic to convert, or what you need is photography or brand strategy. We do the words on the page, not those.

Fixed price · no retainer · no lock-in

Price it by how many listings need re-saying.

Move the dial; the pack and the per-listing price adjust.

A sharper page pays for itself fast. Say your ads send ~500 visits a month and the rewrite lifts conversion from 6% to 7.5% — about 7 extra orders. At a $25 margin, the $149 pack covers itself inside the first month. Your numbers will differ; this is an example, not a guarantee.

How many listings are your ads pointing at?
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Listings1 conversion pack
Per listing$149
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    Risk-free: full money-back within 2 days of delivery.
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    Straight answers

    Before you paste your listing.

    Are you US-based? Can I trust an overseas studio?

    No. We run Bhaniti from India, and writing English that reads native to your market is the whole job. The whole point of the free teardown is that you don't take that on faith: you see a real diagnosis of your own listing and a sample rewrite before any payment, and the Single pack comes with a money-back guarantee. The work is the proof.

    Is this just AI under the hood?

    AI does the first draft, fast, from the facts you give it. Then a person who writes for a living rewrites it: they fix the voice, check every claim against your real product, weave the keywords in so it still reads like English, and keep it clear of the marketplace rules that get listings pulled. The draft is the cheap part; the editing is what you pay for, and you can judge it on the free teardown before you spend a thing.

    Do you do keyword research / search-volume data?

    No, not search-volume data. What you get is conversion copy: the title, bullets, and description that decide whether your paid visitor buys. The backend keywords we include are relevance-based, drawn from your product and category, not from live search volumes. If you want a volume report, a dedicated keyword tool is the right place for that; it isn't something we do.

    What's the refund / guarantee?

    The Single pack is risk-free: if it isn't clearly better than what you've got and worth pasting in, email [email protected] within 2 days of delivery for a full refund, and you keep the files. The multi-listing packs (Starter, Catalog, Scale) aren't refundable, but every pack includes a revision round, so tell us what to sharpen and we'll redo it. We stand behind the writing; conversion also rides on your price, images and reviews, so what we guarantee is the copy we deliver.

    Will the copy make medical or "guaranteed results" claims?

    No. It's marketing copy built only from your real product attributes. No medical/health-safety claims, no fabricated specs or certifications, no guaranteed-sales promises. That keeps your listing off takedowns and your brand out of trouble.

    Will my listing or results be shown publicly?

    No. We never publish your listing, brand, or numbers without your written permission. The example on this page is fictional, and any real client work we feature is anonymised by default. Your competitors won't find your rewritten copy through us.